I dig.
My only problem is things are too dry. Reverb some stuff up, especially that 'tamborine' thing you have going on, and the short strings.
I dig.
My only problem is things are too dry. Reverb some stuff up, especially that 'tamborine' thing you have going on, and the short strings.
I fixed the dry percussions :D! Thanks for the hint.
Honestly..
Honestly, I thought it was a great peice of music. Very simple, because it dosent need anything else.
The beat was solid, and the passage's of the rhythym was great.
Only problem I have is that the first bass runs into itself too much, either make it monophonic or take some release/decay down.
Also, the second bass (if I heard right) was wayyyyyyy to loud. Thats bad.
Overall, good song. Great songwriting.
8/10
Yeah... i see what you mean, and thanks.
Lovely
I really enjoyed this song, the only complaint I have is the drums. It just didn't feel 'groovy' enough, but the rest of the instruments were nearly perfect.
9/10
4/5
Good job!
Yeah, I should really put more time into the drum machine, I'm glad you like the song though! Certainly great to have more listeners. Thanks man!
Very cool, but..
To make it short, it needs to be longer.
It doesnt NEED a lead, or any kind of melody, but if you can find the sweet spot it would make this song fucking amazing.
The song is full of potential, keep working on it!
-Fox
Its okay..
This song isn't as unique as everyone below me might think.. you can find this nearly identical peice of music in most movie and game OST's, however you did a good job on the peice.
6/10
3/5
Damn.
Seriously. Damn.
I got chills.
Please tell me your percussive instruments used at the first minute of the song, I beg you.
Overall, Very Nice
Its a very good song.
Transitions were clean and clear, and flowed very well.
The only thing is, some riffs were extremely over used, and repetetive.
Also, get a new snare drum! Seriously, that thing sounded like total sh*t to me. No offence to you, it just stood out so far from the song, just personal opinion.
Overall, very nice song writing and playing, good job.
First: Thanks for your review.
Second: I know some parts are repeated a lot, but that's my style. I try to make them sound less prominent by putting vocals over them.
And personally, I like my snare drum very much :)
Nice work.
Firstly, I love the polyphonic chords you have going on with the piano. It gives it the 'oompf' the song needs. Fits really nice.
The toms and pizzacato strings worked REALLY nice with each other. Inspired me a little bit. The rhythym that they provide is awesome. Especially with the viola (cello?) on top of it.
Some of the sounds like at 0:45 was over synthesized. I couldnt tell if I was supposed to be listening to a brass section or an odd small orchestral patch.
The rest of the song went very good (great job on the leads) and the last thing is the ending, as this is a loop it dosent loop back too well. So, I'll take it as a song and tell you this:
4/5 9/10 Great job.
-Fox
Thank you for the feedback :)
Awesome!
Sounds great man!
I love this remix. And the original too :)
Great pick of instruments, especially the bell-ish sound!
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